In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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people

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at that time had to

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their

knowledge

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in books to

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and

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pass down

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the development of technology,

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now

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knowledge

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on the

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and many other software. In my opinion, the advantages of

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improvement totally outweigh the drawbacks.             

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the technology is really modern and developed

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and mistakes are still something that can not be totally avoided. The

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sometimes has

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in its system and because the

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is global

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those

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will annoy every

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users

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in any region.

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, the

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may lose stored

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after the

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and

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is quietly uncomfortable. The

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require

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devices and wifi to get access to, so the

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have to prepare a few things before using the

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. But these disadvantages are not worth considering when we compare them to the benefits.             There is a clear benefit that can be assumed immediately

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storing

knowledge

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on the

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saves more places for the

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than storing

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books.

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people

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had to write down

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information

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and had to find

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for all of their books in the past, nowadays, with the same amount of

knowledge

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,

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just need one computer or one

mobilephone

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mobile phone

to

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all that

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.

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, the

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which is stored on the

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can be kept longer and more secure than

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past ways,

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information

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until the

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is broken down (

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forever if there are not any problems )

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the paper can be old and torn through time.

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, because

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can

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information

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as a file and

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they

can name that file,

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finding the

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is much easier, faster and more convenient too.             

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, despite having some disadvantages, the

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proves that it is the most useful and effective way to

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knowledge

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that we have ever known and it is a big development that we have created.