The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 

Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and table show international
water
use
and
water
consumption
in two countries Brazil and the Democratic Republic of
Cango
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Congo
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.
Overall
,it is evident that all 3
water
use
of increased,
however
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however,
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water
use
the
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in the
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most significant sector worldwide was
a
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apply
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agriculture with a
consist
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consistent
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increase all of
years
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the years
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.
Therefore
,
in
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apply
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the table
has
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shows
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a much higher
consumption
in 3 categories in 2000. As the graph shows,
water
use
of
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apply
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for agriculture rose dramatically throughout the 20th century.In 1900,it started
with
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at
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1.000
kilometres
and
it
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apply
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peaked
3,000
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at 3,000
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kilometres
.
Then
,industrial
use
showed a slower increase, starting at around 200
kilometers
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kilometres
show examples
and rising to approximately 600
kilometers
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kilometres
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. Domestic
water
use
remained the lowest, increasing gradually from 100 to about 300
kilometers
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kilometres
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for all period.
Secondly
,the table
Brasil
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Brazil
has a population of 176 million with 26,500
kilometres
of irrigated land.
Then
,
for
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its
water
consumption
per person is
considerebly
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considered
higher at 359 meters.
On the other hand
,the Cango has a population of only 5.2 million, and a few irrigated land,only 10o
kilometres
.The
water
consumption
per individual in Cango is very
law
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low
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,with just 8 metres.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, consumption, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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