The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and table show international
water
use
and water
consumption
in two countries Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Cango
.
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Congo
Overall
,it is evident that all 3 water
use
of increased,however
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however,
water
use
the
most significant sector worldwide was Change preposition
in the
a
agriculture with a Remove the article
apply
consist
increase all of Replace the word
consistent
years
.Add an article
the years
Therefore
,in
the table Change preposition
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has
a much higher Verb problem
shows
consumption
in 3 categories in 2000.
As the graph shows,water
use
of
for agriculture rose dramatically throughout the 20th century.In 1900,it started Change preposition
apply
with
1.000 Change preposition
at
kilometres
and it
peaked Correct pronoun usage
apply
3,000
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at 3,000
kilometres
.Then
,industrial use
showed a slower increase, starting at around 200 kilometers
and rising to approximately 600 Change the spelling
kilometres
kilometers
. Domestic Change the spelling
kilometres
water
use
remained the lowest, increasing gradually from 100 to about 300 kilometers
for all period.
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kilometres
Secondly
,the table Brasil
has a population of 176 million with 26,500 Correct your spelling
Brazil
kilometres
of irrigated land.Then
,for
its Change preposition
apply
water
consumption
per person is considerebly
higher at 359 meters.Correct your spelling
considered
On the other hand
,the Cango has a population of only 5.2 million, and a few irrigated land,only 10o kilometres
.The water
consumption
per individual in Cango is very law
,with just 8 metres.Correct your spelling
low
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