You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the graphs illustrate the difference in the
employment
rate
in four countries between men and women
in the range of age 60 and 64 within two accounted years: 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, while
in the 1970s, there was little difference in the employment
rates in the four countries in the men sector
but more fluctuation in the women
sector
, in the 2000s, the male sector
had also
witness a fluctuation occurred mainly by a significant dwindling of the employment
rate
.
Firstly
, in the man sector
, Japan had the highest employment
rate
in 1997 with 84%, more than 10%, 5% and 11% than Austarlia, Belgium
and the US, respectively. The same occured with the Japanese women
's employment
rate
of 43%, but the difference was more significant: more than 35% and 25% in Australia and Belgium
, respectively.
Nevertheless
, while
such
trends still occurred in the women
sector
in 2000 - with Australia and the US increasing by 1% and 2%, and Japan and Belgium
decreasing by 3% and 1% - the men's sector
in 2000 had decreased significantly: a lost of 80% and 33% in Belgium
and Australia, respectively.Submitted by bendy.anhle on
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