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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts
energy
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production
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 like Gas, Coal, Petrol and Nuclear and others in a nation with 2 different years 1995 and 2005. rrfrfwffb
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from
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roof
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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energy
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production
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 had a positive outcome throughout the decade,
however
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, petrol
production
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 had a noticeable fall.
To begin
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 with, in 1995 Coal and gas were held above a quarter
production
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 at 29.80% and 29.63%, after a decade it showed a slight increment of around 1% and Gas nearly 1%.
Likewise
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, Petrol
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 had
production
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 of a 29.27% but throughout the years it was declining and stood at 19.55% with a decrement of around 10% in 2005 respectively.
In addition
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, Nuclear and other
energy
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production
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 in 1995 stood at 6.40% and 4.90%,
therefore
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 these
energy
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 productions had a positive outcome and after ten years Nuclear and other
energy
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production
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 soared with approximately 3.70%, 4% and stood at 10.10%, 9.10% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • production
  • energy source
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • comparison
  • major/minor changes
  • phased out
  • introduced
  • contribution
  • total energy output
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
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