The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the process

for

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of

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producing

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane.

Overall

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, it is a

seven phases

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seven-phase

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Man-made, linear process. It begins with

growing

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the growing

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of

sugar

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canes

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cane

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and

ending

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ends

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with

drying

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the drying

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and cooling of

sugar

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this

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process will

complete

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be completed

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without any adding for raw materials.

To begin

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,

sugar

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canes

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cane

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need

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is needed

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for 12-18 months for growing, after it

grown

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is grown

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the farmer

start

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starts

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harvested

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harvesting

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all of

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canes

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the canes

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by hand or by truck to collect the

canes

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.

Then

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, crushed

of

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apply

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this

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harvested

sugar

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manually to produce a

juice

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.

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using

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use

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of limestone filter to filter purified

juice

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. In the subsequent stage, the evaporator will begin by

pour

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pouring

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the

juice

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on

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into

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oven

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the oven

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and

let

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letting

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it to

expose

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apply

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for high degree of hotness until

this

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juice

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become

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becomes

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a

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apply

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syrup.

Following

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this

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,

sugar

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crystals were separated from syrup in order to centrifuge.

Finally

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, dried and cooled of collected

sugar

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before

delivering

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being

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it and transported to the stores.