The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected the three regions of the world during 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected the three regions of the world during 1990s.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected the three regions of the world during 1990s.
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The pie chart displays the
percentage
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of the main cause of agricultural lands becoming unproductive. The table shows how
land
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is affected by these reasons between the
three
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continents. Looking at both graphs, there is less link between how the
percentage
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of these causes worldwide affected the
three
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areas. Having 23% of
land
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degraded, Europe is at the top list, with its
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different reasons ranging from 5.5 to 9.8 %.
Second,
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in the list with a total
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of less productive of 13% is mainly caused by overgrazing and deforestation. Surprisingly, none of the degraded
land
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is caused by overcultivation.
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overgrazing is the biggest factor, the data is only applicable to Oceania. In North America and Europe, the largest contributing factors are over-cultivation and deforestation with a
percentage
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of 3.3 and 9.8% respectively. Being one-third of the reason
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, the value of degraded
land
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percentage
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of the
three
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regions does not correspond to the value of the worldwide.
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,
although
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for both figures, the causes may be the same, there is no matching relationship between the values of both graphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, land, three with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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