The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected the three regions of the world during 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected the three regions of the world during 1990s.
The pie chart displays the
percentage
of the main cause of agricultural lands becoming unproductive. The table shows how
land
is affected by these reasons between the
three
continents. Looking at both graphs, there is less link between how the
percentage
of these causes worldwide affected the
three
areas. Having 23% of
land
degraded, Europe is at the top list, with its
three
different reasons ranging from 5.5 to 9.8 %.
Second,
in the list with a total
percentage
of less productive of 13% is mainly caused by overgrazing and deforestation. Surprisingly, none of the degraded
land
is caused by overcultivation.
While
overgrazing is the biggest factor, the data is only applicable to Oceania. In North America and Europe, the largest contributing factors are over-cultivation and deforestation with a
percentage
of 3.3 and 9.8% respectively. Being one-third of the reason
percentage
, the value of degraded
land
percentage
of the
three
regions does not correspond to the value of the worldwide.
Overall
,
although
for both figures, the causes may be the same, there is no matching relationship between the values of both graphs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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