The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows

the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart indicates how much electricity Ireland produces and the table presents the primary reasons.
For instance
coal, gas, wind and solar for using
this
land.
Overall
. it is clear to see that electric production is in demand for coal to produce energy the most.
As well as
gas that the electricity sources is very essential and impact with it.
While
the residential sectors
such
as wind and solar didn't need the supply
energy
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of energy
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as much as fossil fuels and the industrial sectors.
To begin
with, the largest numeral that uses
this
currency power is the industrial sector as coal with 45% more than other reasons when compared.
Likewise
, the gas that needs power at 35% is the second demand in Ireland.
However
, the amount of environmental impact like wind and solar use only 10% of the sources of energy which means that they use almost three times less electricity than the two mentioned above.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
  • residential sector
  • industrial sector
  • commercial sector
  • trends
  • changes over time
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