Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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individuals
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airlines
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some
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segments
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reservations
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why
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on why
air
travel
should be unaffordable to mitigate environemntal
problems in subsequent paragraphs.
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environmental
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individuals'
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people
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air
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tickets
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apply
internation
tours. There are numerous advantages Correct your spelling
international
of
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to
consedering
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considering
air
transportation. First and foremost, in critical medical conditions
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conditions,
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airline
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transporting
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brains
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the help
afforadable
travelling system.
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an affordable
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global
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concerns
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about
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the incresing
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amount of Correct your spelling
increasing
air
transit system
as individuals focus more on Fix the agreement mistake
systems
to
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travelling
travel
in fast
way. Add an article
a fast
However
, there are significant disvantageous
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disadvantageous
advantageous
for
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at
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the enviornmental
enviornmental
level. Apart from that, one of the major Correct your spelling
environmental
impact
is Change to a plural noun
impacts
pollulted
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a pollulted
enviroment
and rising Correct your spelling
environment
level
of ozone and nitrogen in Fix the agreement mistake
levels
air
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the air
that
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apply
flight
fuel contains high source
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sources
this
substances which, Correct determiner usage
these
is
dangerous for health. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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UK
health Correct article usage
the UK
goevrnment
many people are suffering from health disorders because of poor Correct your spelling
government
air
in cities. In order to, prevent ongoing flight
way individuals should change mode of travelling as short for distances train or road transportation can be covinient
and cheap in usage. Correct your spelling
convenient
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, Goverment
should tackle Correct your spelling
government
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issue with
connecting to Change preposition
by
airlines
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airline
torism
and with public support.
In conclusion, I believe Correct your spelling
tourism
air
travel
can be fast and conivinient
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convenient
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the impcat
impcat
on Correct your spelling
impact
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the enviornment
enviornment
can be hazardous and affects living species more as it should be in high consideration. Correct your spelling
environment
Furthermore
, there should be mass
focus on Add an article
a mass
the mass
usage
of Add an article
the usage
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flights
situation
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situations
internation
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international
tour
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tours
distances
other transportation can be effective Add a comma
distances,
at
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apply
overall
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