The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph below shows the percentage of four Western countries between 1970 and 2020 and the percentage of guests between 2030 and 2040.
First,
while
the
Philippines
had the largest
population
in 1970 and Indonesia the smallest,
Malaysia
had a
population
that grew faster than the other three countries in the early 1980s and became the first in 2040. At the same time, the number of citizens in
Malaysia
and Indonesia increased by about three times,
while
the populations of Thailand and the
Philippines
doubled.
Although
the
Philippines
surpassed
Malaysia
in 1970 and 1990, the
Philippines
became the largest in 2000, Indonesia surpassed Thailand in 2000 and
then
surpassed the
Philippines
in 2010 to become second.
This
ratio has not changed in the following years. In short, the graph below shows the populations of the four countries; in 1970, the
Philippines
had the largest
population
,
while
in 2040, the largest
population
will be in
Malaysia
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, population, malaysia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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