The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flowchart shows how
bricks
are produced for construction purposes.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the entire process of making
bricks
consists of eight steps, beginning with the collection of clay and concluding with the delivery of the finished product to the market. In the first stage, clay is collected by a digger; after which the collected materials are sieved using a metal grid. The sieved clay is
then
transported on a roller to mix with sand and water, resulting in a mixture for
further
processing. In the following stage, the mixture is cut by a wire cutter or moulded into raw
bricks
before being moved into a drying oven to dry for 24 to 28 hours. Once the raw
bricks
are dried, they are transported to a kiln where they are
initially
heated at moderate temperatures (200 °C to 980 °C) and
then
further
heated at higher temperatures ranging from 870 °C to 1300 °C.
Subsequently
, the heated
bricks
are transferred to a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. In the
last
step, the finished products are packaged to be delivered by truck to construction sites that use the
bricks
.
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