The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050. These given charts consist of three cohorts,
such
as
kids
, teenagers and
adults
, and
elderly
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the elderly
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. Yemen in 2000 demonstrated the biggest percentage
in
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of
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kids
50.1%,
while
the prediction in 2050 will
falling
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fall
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to 37%.
Furthermore
, young
adults
had almost half of
portion
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the portion
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and elder people had around 3 per cent in 2000.
Moreover
, these two generations had a growth
almost
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60% and 6% respectively. Italy in 2000 displayed the demographic of young
adults
was the highest proportion
in
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at
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61.6%. Meanwhile, in 2050, teenagers and
adults
had a reduction to nearly half of
proportion
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the proportion
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.
Moreover
,
kids
filled in 14.3%,
while
in 2050, there will
a
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slight decrease to 11.5%.
In addition
, the elderly had almost a quarter portion in 2000 and they will rise the number of demographics to 42.3 per cent.
Overall
, Yemen had the largest proportion
kids
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of kids
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in 2000,
while
the prediction shows the age group of 15-59 has the biggest percentage in 2050.
However
, Italy had the same generation in 2000 and 2050, teenagers and
adults
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words kids, adults with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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