The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050. These given charts consist of three cohorts,
such
as kids
, teenagers and adults
, and elderly
.
Yemen in 2000 demonstrated the biggest percentage Correct article usage
the elderly
in
Change preposition
of
kids
50.1%, while
the prediction in 2050 will falling
to 37%. Wrong verb form
fall
Furthermore
, young adults
had almost half of portion
and elder people had around 3 per cent in 2000. Add an article
the portion
Moreover
, these two generations had a growth almost
60% and 6% respectively.
Italy in 2000 displayed the demographic of young Change preposition
of almost
adults
was the highest proportion in
61.6%.
Meanwhile, in 2050, teenagers and Change preposition
at
adults
had a reduction to nearly half of proportion
. Add an article
the proportion
Moreover
, kids
filled in 14.3%, while
in 2050, there will a
slight decrease to 11.5%. Add a missing verb
be a
In addition
, the elderly had almost a quarter portion in 2000 and they will rise the number of demographics to 42.3 per cent.
Overall
, Yemen had the largest proportion kids
in 2000, Change preposition
of kids
while
the prediction shows the age group of 15-59 has the biggest percentage in 2050. However
, Italy had the same generation in 2000 and 2050, teenagers and adults
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