The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts illustrate how 4 countries generated energy from 3 resources between 2003 and 2008.
Overall
, nuclear power was the primary source of electricity
in Sweden throughout the period, while
it was not utilized in Morocco and Vietnam. Moreover
, 56% of Vietnam's total electricity
was generated from fossil fuels
, while
in Morocco it was only 5%. The remainder of both countries' electricity
was generated exclusively from hydropower. 4
In India, however
, electricity
from fossil fuels
accounted for 82% of total electricity
generated. This
was the highest proportion of fossil fuels
used among the four countries.
In Sweden, fossil fuels
were responsible for only 4% of total electricity
generated. Furthermore
, hydropower and nuclear power contributed 52% and 44%, respectively.
In conclusion, regarding the remaining sector, nuclear power was produced only by India and Sweden, with the figures standing at 4% and 44% in that order. However
, Morocco and Vietnam did not produce that kind of energySubmitted by viktoria.popova92 on
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