The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These pie charts illustrate how 4 countries generated energy from 3 resources between 2003 and 2008.

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, nuclear power was the primary source of

electricity

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in Sweden throughout the period,

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it was not utilized in Morocco and Vietnam.

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, 56% of Vietnam's total

electricity

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was generated from fossil

fuels

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in Morocco it was only 5%. The remainder of both countries'

electricity

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was generated exclusively from hydropower. 4 In India,

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electricity

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from fossil

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accounted for 82% of total

electricity

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generated.

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was the highest proportion of fossil

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used among the four countries. In Sweden, fossil

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were responsible for only 4% of total

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generated.

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, hydropower and nuclear power contributed 52% and 44%, respectively. In conclusion, regarding the remaining sector, nuclear power was produced only by India and Sweden, with the figures standing at 4% and 44% in that order.

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, Morocco and Vietnam did not produce that kind of energy

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, fuels with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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5 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

Electricity generation
Energy sources
Coal-powered
Natural gas
Nuclear energy
Hydroelectric power
Renewable resources
Energy mix
Clean energy
Sustainable practices
Trend analysis
Environmental impact
Energy transition
Significant increase/decrease
Energy reliance
Energy portfolio
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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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