The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The supplied process depicts the way how biofuel named ethanol is
manifactured
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manufactured
.
Overall
, as data observed there are 10 steps of producing ethanol. The first stage is about the plants that
received
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energy from the mixture of sunlight and CO2 and the
last
step is a
ditribution
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distribution
of carbon dioxide into
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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from the various transports.
Firstly
, the plants and trees
got
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some energy sources from the CO2 and
sunbeam
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sunbeams
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.
Following
this
, employees will
collecte
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collect
those
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the
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vegetations
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and
made
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harvests from them.
Then
, all the
crop
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crops
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will be reproduced into cellulose through the special mechanism. After that stage, it
went
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to the handling area and cellulose will turn into sugars.
At
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the seventh and eighth steps, the microbes in the sugars will be altered into ethanol.
Subsequently
,
this
gas will be useful for vehicles
such
as cars and trucks to ride and planes to fly.
Finally
, the carbon emissions from
transports
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transport
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will be produced in large
number
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numbers
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and those emissions will return to the first stage and start over the
cicle
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cycle
circle
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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