The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how fuel called ethanol is produced and goes through the circular process.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the entire procedure has eight main stages, starting
from
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the growth of crucial plants and ending with the consumption of ethanol in the transportation industry.
Firstly
, the cycle begins
by
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the
combine
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of
the
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sunlight and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, which
then
creates a necessary source of energy for the growth of trees and plants. After reaching a certain level of maturity, trees are mechanically
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before being put into a pre-processing machine to extract the not needed
stuffs
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. In the next step, the
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materials are chemically processed to turn into sugars, which are combined with microbes,
for making
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biofuel ethanol.
This
chemical is mostly used in fossil fuel production for
the
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different types of transport, including automobiles, trucks and
airplanes
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,
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before
being go
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back into the atmosphere through gas emission. The vegetation
then
, again, takes
this
as energy, and the cycle restarts.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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