The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how fuel called ethanol is produced and goes through the circular process.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the entire procedure has eight main stages, starting from
the growth of crucial plants and ending with the consumption of ethanol in the transportation industry.
Change preposition
with
Firstly
, the cycle begins by
the Change preposition
with
combine
of Replace the word
combination
the
sunlight and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, which Correct article usage
apply
then
creates a necessary source of energy for the growth of trees and plants. After reaching a certain level of maturity, trees are mechanically harvesting
before being put into a pre-processing machine to extract the not needed Wrong verb form
harvested
stuffs
.
In the next step, the Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
broken down
materials are chemically processed to turn into sugars, which are combined with microbes, Add a hyphen
broken-down
for making
biofuel ethanol. Change preposition
to make
This
chemical is mostly used in fossil fuel production for the
different types of transport, including automobiles, trucks and Correct article usage
apply
airplanes
Change the spelling
aeroplanes
,
before Remove the comma
apply
being go
back into the atmosphere through gas emission. The vegetation Change the verb form
going
then
, again, takes this
as energy, and the cycle restarts.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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