The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The supplied process depicts the way how biofuel named ethanol is
manifactured
.
Correct your spelling
manufactured
Overall
, as data observed there are 10 steps of producing ethanol. The first stage is about the plants that received
energy from the mixture of sunlight and CO2 and the Wrong verb form
receive
last
step is a ditribution
of carbon dioxide into Correct your spelling
distribution
atmosphere
from the various transports.
Add an article
the atmosphere
Firstly
, the plants and trees got
some energy sources from the CO2 and Wrong verb form
get
sunbeam
. Fix the agreement mistake
sunbeams
Following
this
, employees will collecte
Correct your spelling
collect
those
Correct determiner usage
the
vegetations
and Fix the agreement mistake
vegetation
made
harvests from them. Wrong verb form
make
Then
, all the crop
will be reproduced into cellulose through the special mechanism. After that stage, it Fix the agreement mistake
crops
went
to the handling area and cellulose will turn into sugars.
Wrong verb form
goes
At
the seventh and eighth steps, the microbes in the sugars will be altered into ethanol. Change preposition
In
Subsequently
, this
gas will be useful for vehicles such
as cars and trucks to ride and planes to fly. Finally
, the carbon emissions from transports
will be produced in large Fix the agreement mistake
transport
number
and those emissions will return to the first stage and start over the Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
cicle
.Correct your spelling
cycle
circle
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