The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
The graphs show the amount of CO2
emissions
of
each person in four countries, Change preposition
by
United
Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. At first glance, Correct article usage
the United
it is clear that
the difference among
the number of CO2 Change preposition
in
emissions
decreased steadily from 1967 to 2007.
To begin
, people who lives
in United Change the verb form
live
Staes
emitted CO2 much higher than people who Correct your spelling
States
lives
in other countries. It still remained the highest Change the verb form
live
figure
in 2007, however
, it was lower than that of 1967. A number
of Correct article usage
Number
Swedish's
Change noun form
Swedish
emission
was almost Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
get
close to Verb problem
apply
American's
Correct your spelling
America's
emission
, but it dropped by about 7 metric tonnes Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
that
was close to Correct pronoun usage
which
figure
of Italy. The Add an article
the figure
figure
of
Italy Change preposition
for
was shown
Wrong verb form
showed
overall
increase, and it was higher than the Add an article
an overall
figure
of
Sweden in 2007. The amount of Portugal people's Change preposition
for
emission
kept rising Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
similarly
, but it remained almost same
result Correct article usage
the same
with
Sweden. Swedish reached a peak of their CO2 Change preposition
as
emissions
in 1977, but their amount of CO2 emissions
was halved at the end
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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