the diagram shows the parts of a coffee maker

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the

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information about

wich

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which

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parts a device for

coffee

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preparation

consist

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of. The most important sections are

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the top unit, the middle and the bottom. Starting at the top, the

coffee

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maker has a

section

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wich

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is essential for pouring the drink. On the other

side

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there is a light bulb,

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indicates the power. Right under the light, there is

tube

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, that removes all the extra materials during the process. Next to the

pipe

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there is a sieve, made of paper,

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available to filter the smallest grounds of

coffee

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out. The middle

section

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consist

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of a blade and a screen, made of metal, for filtering. Working together, these two mechanisms crush the biggest

coffee

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grounds. The lower

section

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of the machine has a container, where water boils. On the right side of the compartment, there is a handle, with

special

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designed for users' convenience. The lower

section

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this

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part of the device has a feature for making a liquid hot.

Finally

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, there is a cable, that provides the whole system with electricity.

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