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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Pie chart shows the which transports people used. Table shows reasons why they are used transports.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Pie chart shows the which transports people used. Table shows reasons why they are used transports.
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The pie chart provides information about transport and cars which are used in Edmonton
while
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 the table illustrates the reason people use transport in the city.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the cars witnessed an upward trend and the Taxi and bus were seen a downward trend.
Furthermore
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, the highest was recorded in commuting to work and the lowest was seen in shopping and leisure activities. It can be seen in the pie chart, the percentage of cars stood at 45 per
cent
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 and the proportion of LRT accounted for about 35 per
cent
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. The date of the bus was the same as the figure for the taxi, accounting for 10 per
cent
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.
In addition
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, the percentage of commuting to work stood at 55 per
cent
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.
Then
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, the date for business accounted for 45 per
cent
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 and the proportion of taking children to school stood at 40 per
cent
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.
Next,
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the statistics for shopping and leisure activities stood at 15 per
cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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