In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Numerous individuals would rather own a

home

, and they disclose it has considerable importance for them in some specific countries.

This

preference stems from many reasons. In the following, both sides of

this

viewpoint and factors that lead to

this

trend are elaborated. Several factors have affected

this

issue

. As a contributing factor, whenever

people

have a

home

, they do not have to afford money

for renting

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every month or every year.

Hence

, they are able to save their money for more essential goals which they have in their lives.

In addition

, if

people

own a

home

, they can unwind easily, and they get away from financial issues more easily than other

people

who do not have a

home

. These reasons,

thus

, cause the present attitudes of

people

in these countries.

This

issue

, similar to other issues, has positive and negative aspects. One prime negative point about

this

circumstance is that

,

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this

time, a myriad of

people

would rather purchase a house, and the price of houses dramatically increases and can cause several economic crises.

In contrast

,

people

who do their best to obtain money for purchasing a house

that they

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have a higher motivation and enthusiasm in comparison with other

people

who do not care about possession

a

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house.

This

issue

,

thus

, has some advantages and drawbacks

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this

issue

a positive or negative situation. To sum it up, from my standpoint, irrespective of all the mentioned factors which bring about a positive situation,

this

issue

has negative aspects which I argue that it is not the appropriate trend.