You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The charts illustrate the proportion of Australian household
energy
utilization and gas
emission
produced by it.
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emissions
Overall
, it is evident that Australian households mainly use heating energy
and gas
emission
dominantly come from water heating. There is no positive correlation Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
of
Change preposition
between
energy
use and the gas
emission
create
.
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created
to
the first chart, there is 42% of heating Remove the preposition
apply
energy
used by Australian household
, making it Fix the agreement mistake
households
as
the dominant consumption. Change preposition
apply
Following
this
, 30% of the communities utilize water heating
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water-heating
energy
. While
other appliances
usage is 15%, refrigeration utilization is only half of it (7%). Change the noun form
appliance
In contrast
, the consumption of lighting and cooling energy
shows only 4% and 2%, respectively.
Moving to the second chart, the largest gas
emission
is generated from water heating, accounting for 32% of total output. Other appliances' gas
production follows with 28% of total
proportion. Add an article
the total
Then
, heating and refrigeration have a similar rate of emission
creation, which are 15% and 14% respectively. While
lighting contributes to 8% of total gas
emission
, cooling exhibits the least Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
emission
contribution with only 3%.Submitted by chocolate10
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, emission with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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