You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The above first pie chart reveals data on the average

energy

used in Australian Households

while

the other chart demonstrates the Australian

Households

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Households'

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greenhouse

gass

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gas

emissions resulting from

energy

consumption. The most significant feature is the heating proportion of

energy

used had the highest score.

While

the

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apply

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water heating was the strongest in gas emissions.

However

, the weakest rate in both

gases

and

energy

was related to cooling which is 3% and 2%. It's noticeable that the heating percentage sharply decreased from 42% in

energy

used to 15% in

gass

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gas

evaporation.

In contrast

, the number of other

application

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applications

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showed

dramatically

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dramatic

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growth from 15% in

energy

consumed to 28% with

gases

.

Moreover

, lighting and refrigeration exhibited a similar increasing pattern from 4% and 7% to 8% and 14% in

gases emission

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gas emissions

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.

In addition

, the percentage of heating had 42% in

energy

then

started to drop to 15% with

gases

.

Whereas

the score of water heating

was remain

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remained

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stable

approximately

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at approximately

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with

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apply

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the same range from 30% to 32%.