The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of diferent employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The figure presented below illustrates the amount of free
time
per week with respect to sex and employment status. Based on the provided data, men dedicate more time
to leisure activities whereas
women, with the same employment status, generally spend less time
on the same matter.
As expected, the graph shows a paradoxical relation between the hours spent on outside work and leisure; where an increase in one results in the other’s decrease. However
, it is worth noting that a housewife has almost as less of free time
as a fully working man which represents the importance and difficulty of household chores. The mentioned point shows itself better when comparing the full-time
employed women’s free time
to that of a man: having to also
be responsible for the household maintenance has an approximately 10-hour effect.
Overall
, it can be seen that the given information, while
educating, lacks insight into the male population when it comes to part-time
employees and men acting as at-home dads both of which could be beneficial for more accurate results.Submitted by anahitakhosravi4 on
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