The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the
emissions
of carbon
dioxide
per person in four different countries in Europe during a period
of 40 years, between 1967 and 2007. While
Portugal had the lowest carbon
dioxide
emissions
during the whole period
, the United Kingdom produced the most carbon
dioxide
over the displayed time period
.
Although
the carbon
dioxide
emissions
fell from over 10 metric tonnes in 1967 to about 9 in 2007, this
country had the highest emissions
of all four countries during the whole time period
. Even though Sweden showed an increase of
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dioxide
emissions
between the year
1967 and 1977, almost reaching the Fix the agreement mistake
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amount
of emissions
of the United Kingdom in 1977, the emissions
then
decreased steeply and ended by 5 metric tonnes in 2007, the same amount
as Portugal.
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carbon
dioxide
pollution during this
time, it had the lowest emissions
of all the countries until 2007, when Sweden equaled
their Change the spelling
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amount
. Italy however
, showed an increase of
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emissions
as well, reaching an amount
of 7 metric tonnes in 2007.Submitted by nadja_stenz on
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