The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The data illustrates the proportion of central types of fuel produced in the UK in 22
years
from 1981 to 2000. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
petroleum is the most
favored
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by the citizens, natural gas witnessed an upward trend,
while
coal fluctuated dramatically throughout the period. In 1981, petroleum
as well as
coal production started
of
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at around 100 and 80
energy
units
. From 1981 to 1987, the trend not only
qualdrupled
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quadrupled
itself but
also
reached a plateau for a few
years
.
However
, petroleum production slumped rapidly in five
years
, once again
started
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from
crack
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a crack
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at 100
energy
units
. A decade
after
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, the data demonstrates a
stably
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stable
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increase
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increased
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level.
On the other hand
, coal resources experienced a downward oscillation throughout 22
years
, as
it
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they
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havled
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halved
sharply at under 40
energy
units
in the third year from 1981. Contrastingly,
eventhough
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even though
natural gas stayed flat at the early stage, the trend rose steeply from 40 to over
a
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100
energy
units
.
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  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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