the table belwo provieds information about the three largest pacific islands. summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the table belwo provieds information about the three largest pacific islands. summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
In the
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table gives an overview
about
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the size and
population
as well as
the localization of the
three
largest Pacific
islands
New
Guinea
,
Honshu
and
Sulawesi
. Compared to the other two
islands
,
Honshu
has the biggest
population
,
while
New
Guinea
is the biggest island with the smallest
population
density
. All
three
islands
are situated in different regions in the Pacific Ocean. The Island
New
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Guinea
has an area of almost 790000 km2 and is more than five times bigger than
Sulawesi
, which is the smallest of these
three
islands
.
While
Honshu
belongs to the country of Japan, and
Sulawesi
to Indonesia, New
Guinea
is divided up under two countries, Indonesia and Papua New
Guinea
. Another important information provided in the table is the
population
and
population
density
of the
three
islands
.
Honshu
has the biggest
population
of 103000000 people living there, almost 7 times more compared to New
Guinea
with the smallest
population
of 15000000.
That is
even more impressive if you look at the
population
density
of the
islands
.
While
Honshu
has a
density
of approximately 450, 4 times bigger than the
population
density
of
Sulawesi
, New
Guinea
has the smallest
density
of only 10.
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