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the table belwo provieds information about the three largest pacific islands. summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the table belwo provieds information about the three largest pacific islands. summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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In the
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The
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 table gives an overview
about
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of
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 the size and
population
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as well as
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 the localization of the
three
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 largest Pacific
islands
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 New
Guinea
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,
Honshu
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 and
Sulawesi
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. Compared to the other two
islands
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,
Honshu
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 has the biggest
population
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,
while
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 New
Guinea
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 is the biggest island with the smallest
population
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density
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. All
three
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islands
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 are situated in different regions in the Pacific Ocean. The Island
New
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of New
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Guinea
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 has an area of almost 790000 km2 and is more than five times bigger than
Sulawesi
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, which is the smallest of these
three
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islands
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.
While
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Honshu
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 belongs to the country of Japan, and
Sulawesi
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 to Indonesia, New
Guinea
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 is divided up under two countries, Indonesia and Papua New
Guinea
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. Another important information provided in the table is the
population
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 and
population
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density
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 of the
three
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islands
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.
Honshu
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 has the biggest
population
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 of 103000000 people living there, almost 7 times more compared to New
Guinea
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 with the smallest
population
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 of 15000000.
That is
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 even more impressive if you look at the
population
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density
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 of the
islands
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.
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Honshu
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 has a
density
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 of approximately 450, 4 times bigger than the
population
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density
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 of
Sulawesi
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, New
Guinea
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 has the smallest
density
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 of only 10.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, three, islands, guinea, honshu, sulawesi, density with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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