The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented illustration depicts the outcome of a massive renovation of an unnamed island.

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, it can be noted that the island is fully transformed into a massive resort which is fully equipped with all the basic facilities for the tourists. Before the reconstruction, the land most likely was uninhabited and rather spacious with only a couple of palms and trees,

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a natural beach on the west coast. Now the southern part is transformed into a pier, which leads to a reception zone in the middle of the land and a restaurant up north via a vehicle track. Near the reception, there are two accommodation zones with bungalows, interconnected with a footpath, which

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connects facilities to the beach.

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, despite all noted construction processes, the ecosystem of the island is preserved: the trees and palms remain untouched, and the natural beach is adapted into a swimming area.

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, the east coast is left untouched, probably for

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development.

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