Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The question of the most pressing environmental issue of the current times has sparked the debate, with some asserting that

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the extinction

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of certain animal

species

has led to

this

situation,

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others argue that broader ecological problems should take precedence.

Although

it is evident that the cooperation of versatile

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harms

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to environment more than

extinction

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both sides of

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in detail. On one side of the argument,

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the extinction

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of animal

species

poses significant threats to

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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and biodiversity. Each solitary alive creature on

planet

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the planet

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has its own role in

food

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the food

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chain. When one animal

species

vanishes, turbulence in the number of another

species

that is

alive may occur as it would be food

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the other.

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this

man-made chaos in nature brings disorder

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equilibrium

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the equilibrium

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of the world.

Conversely

, there are other factors that cooperate with

extinction

to devastate the environment. These are issues like air pollution, global warming, deforestation etc. Starting with global warming, global warming is the immediate result of air pollution. A lot of noxious gases are emitted daily from factories or exhaust fumes.

As a result

, the earth is unable to breathe properly and the temperature of it soars increasingly.

Furthermore

, there are a lot of operations of logging and forest destruction going on these days which undermines the capacity

of absorbing

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the emitted

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

. In summary,

although

the

extinction

of

species

is concerning, the broader environmental challenges should take priority. By recognizing the most pressing ones from the aforementioned issues and setting about tackling them we can resolve the environmental problem and guarantee a better future for us and the next generations.