The line graph shows the number of cars sold in the USA, Japan, and Germany between 2010 and 2020.

The line graph shows the number of cars sold in the USA, Japan, and Germany between 2010 and 2020.
The line graph illustrates the number of cars sold in the
USA
, Japan, and Germany between 2010 and 2020.
Overall
,
car
sales
in the
USA
and Germany increased significantly over the period,
while
Japan experienced a gradual decline. The
USA
consistently had the highest number of
car
sales
,
whereas
Japan saw the lowest
sales
by the end of the decade. In 2010,
car
sales
in the
USA
started at 2
million
, rising sharply to 4
million
by 2020. Germany followed a similar upward trend, though at a slower rate, with
sales
increasing from 1.5
million
to 3
million
during the same period.
In contrast
, Japan’s
car
sales
decreased steadily from 1.2
million
to 800,000.
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