The maps below show the layout of a small town in 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the layout of a small
town
in 1990 and 2020, highlighting the significant changes that occurred over this
30-year period. Overall
, the town
underwent considerable development, with more residential areas and facilities added by 2020. Most of the open spaces and farmland
in 1990 were replaced by housing and infrastructure, while
the road
network expanded to accommodate the town
’s growth.
In 1990, the town
was primarily composed of a small cluster of houses in the northeast and large areas of farmland
and woodland to the south and west. A narrow road
connected the houses to the main road
running through the town
. By 2020, the town
expanded significantly. The farmland
in the southern part was replaced by a large housing estate, and a new road
system was built to connect the housing development to the main road
.
Additionally
, a shopping mall was constructed in the southwest, replacing part of the woodland area. A new school was also
built to the east of the original housing area, catering to the town
's growing population. Notably, the central part of the town
saw the addition of a park, providing green space for the residents, whereas
in
1990, Add the comma(s)
, in
this
area was occupied by farmland
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