The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture displays the evolution of cutting tools in the Stone Age from 1.4 million years ago to 0.8 million years ago.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the instrument has not only been sharp but Linking Words
also
wide and well-sized.
On the one hand, it was seen that 1.4 million years ago Linking Words
Tool
A had a blunt peak from the front Use synonyms
view
. Use synonyms
However
, the side Linking Words
view
of Use synonyms
Tool
A seemed flatter than the front and back views. Meanwhile, the back Use synonyms
view
of the Use synonyms
Tool
A has a sharp edge.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
Tool
B had some massive progress during the period. Use synonyms
Similarly
, it can be seen that the front Linking Words
view
of Use synonyms
Tool
B had a sharp edge compared to Use synonyms
Tool
A. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the side Linking Words
view
had Use synonyms
also
become flat and thinner than that of Linking Words
Tool
A. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the back Linking Words
view
of Use synonyms
Tool
B had gained size and it was growing wider than Use synonyms
Tool
A.Use synonyms
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