It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
The different opinions
between
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apply
indivuals
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individuals
are
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be train
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sports
and musician
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musicians
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some people
think that hardwork
and training can surpass talented Correct your spelling
hard work
people
because they deserve to achieve award
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awards
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people
who wark
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the
others still lose to talented Correct article usage
apply
people
and only have a small chance to win from them.
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which
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who
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born
talent
gave them a natural advantage in Fix the agreement mistake
talents
sports
, musics
and others. Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
For example
, a famous football player like Lionel Messi often get
the Change the verb form
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achievment
from the other players even though he trains less than Ronaldo who trains the most frequently among all players. Correct your spelling
achievements
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, Individual
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talent
and hardworker
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hard work
fo
them to achieve excellence Correct your spelling
for
due to
natural talent
can provide a head start and the combination of hard work. This
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On the other hand
, there are those who argue that anyone can be taught to become good at sports
or music through disciplined practice and proper instruction. They point to the fact that many successful athletes and musicians started with little natural talent
but worked a bit harder to hone their skills. For example
, some sports
players may not have had an immediate advantage but became exceptional through years of dedicated training.
In conclusion, while
some people
may indeed be born with certain talents, I believe that anyone can be taught to succeed with the right approach and hard work. Both natural ability and training play crucial roles. However
, perseverance is the most important factor for long-term achievement.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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