The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates the demand for
energy
and the available energy
from fossil fuels in freedom-nia over 15 years and expectations for the next five years.
Overall
, the two types of energy
flustered over the period. The existing energy
started under 4 and will end with a lesser unit
. The required energy
begined
at 5 and will increase Correct your spelling
begins
begin
at the end
.
The demand power
begins with Change preposition
for power
Correct article usage
an increased
increased
Replace the word
increase
then
it reached its peak in
about 6 units in 1995 Change preposition
at
the
declined steadily to Correct your spelling
then
unit
3 in 2000 and it seems it will stay in the same unit
.
in
the other hand, Change preposition
On
existing
power decreased at the beginning of the period from 5 to 2 Correct article usage
the existing
unit
Fix the agreement mistake
units
in1990
Correct your spelling
in 1990
then
it remained for 5 years. After
this
, it is increasing dramatically upward.Submitted by danall1kat on
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