The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the
population
in four Asian countries
inhabiting in
urban areas from 1970 to 2020, with Change preposition
apply
forecast
for 2030 and 2040.
The number of Fix the agreement mistake
forecasts
Indonesian
in 1970 was around 10% and the Replace the word
Indonesians
population
increased from nearly 10% to 20% in 2000. At this
point in 2000 started, the propotion
had been a massive increase from 20% to 60% for 40 years.
The Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
population
of Thailand was 20% in 1970, yet it was a slight increase which was approximately 30% until 2000. After 2000, the percentage of population
in Thailand boosted Add an article
the population
frorm
20% to around 50%.
In Correct your spelling
from
Philippines
, the Correct article usage
the Philippines
population
was above 30 % and it promoted 20% until 1990. However
, it dropped from 50 % to 40 % from 2000 to 2010. In 2010, it tended to increasing
gradually from 40% to over 50%.
The Change the verb form
increase
population
in Malaysia was 30% in 1970 and it has increased 10
% Change preposition
by 10
for
1 year. There was a slight decrease in 1990, Change preposition
in
while
the time in 2000 started to boost from over 40% to over 80%.
Before 2000, four southeastern countries
seemed to a
great increase. After 1990, 3 Add a missing verb
have a
countries
' populations boosted rapidly. The most increasing populations of countries
are Malaysia and Indonesia. And the stably increasing population
is in Thailand. The country of population
that has a tiny gap is Philippines
.Correct article usage
the Philippines
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