the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar charts illustrate percentages of weekly
spent
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spending
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on 8 aspects (
food
, housing, fuel and power, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, household goods, personal goods, transport and
leisure
) in households in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, formerly, the households spent more
money
on
food
in 1968, lattery,
leisure
was the majority aspect that the families spent most of their
money
in 2018.
Whereas
the least amount of
money
was spent on fuel and power
on
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in
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the period given.
Furthermore
, the most significant
disparities
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disparity
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in
money
distributed was on
food
. In terms of
food
, people spent about 35% of their funds in 1968, compared to just
at
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around 20% in 2018.
Similarly
, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, fuel and power and personal goods were spent on 5-10% in 1968,
this
amount was higher than only below 5% in 2018.
On the other hand
, the amount of
money
paid out on housing, transport and
leisure
were
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was
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less in 1968 than in 2018. Approximately 10% was spent
by
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on
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housing and
leisure
respectively in 1968, as opposed to both aspects
had
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having
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around 20% portion in 2018. As
regard
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regards
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as
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transport, which had 10% in 1968, it increased
at
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to
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around 15% in 2018.
On
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conversely
, the only aspect that had similar percentages of
weekly
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the weekly
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fund
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funds
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was household golds, which accounted
around
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for around
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8% throughout 4 decades.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure, money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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