Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge & experience

People have different views about the

study

locations of

children

, some people suggest that the home is better for

children

to learn,

while

others believe that

children

should

study

in

the

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school

.

Children

studying at home with families which can get more careful care.

For example

, a lot of families in China society may

be

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apply

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only

having

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have

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one child, who can easily

has

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have

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much love and attention

for

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from

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their

parents

. If they feel hungry, their

parents

can

immediatly

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immediately

hear that a child is crying and give

children

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the children

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some food. It is really

benefit

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beneficial

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for

children

's body development.

However

, some individuals argue that studying at

school

is crucial for

children

to learn social communication skills and make them have an outgoing personality.

Firstly

,When

children

study

at

school

, they can make many friends, which can improve their social communication skills. If they

learning

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learn

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at home,they can only talk

everything

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about everything

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with their

parents

.

In addition

,

school

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the school

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has large spaces for

children

to exercise.They can

running

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run

be running

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,

jumpping

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jumping

,

swimming

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swim

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, playing

bedminton

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badminton

freely, which can help them keep healthy.

Finally

, schools have professional

teacher

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teachers

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in different subjects.

Teacher

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Teachers

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may

be give

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give

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children

more specialized

guidence

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guidance

to learn more in-depth knowledge. In my opinion, where to

study

is a personal choice and it is decided by the

parents

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parent's

parents'

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and

children

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children's

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own situation.If

children

have sufficient self-care ability, I doubly support their

study

at

school

.When I was young, I really enjoy

go

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going

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to

school

because I can play with a lot of peers.I can get much interesting knowledge in classes

everyday

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every day

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.