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The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above table demonstrates the average
number
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 of hours and the amount of money people are spending at three different types of restaurants.
Overall
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, the most significant feature is Vancouver Georgia Street received the highest
number
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 in transaction value,
Eat-in
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, take-away and
number
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 of transactions.
While
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 the weakest score on the average
number
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 of transactions was related to dark
street
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streets
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.
Moreover
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, the low main average of other categories was between
Dunsmuir
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 and
Darke
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 Street. The
number
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 of transaction values in Georgia had a strong amount within 10.69
then
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 tended to decrease sharply at
Dunsmuir
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 to 5.61.
However
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, the
number
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 of values at
Darke
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 was in between the two which is 9.02.
In contrast
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, the rate of people
chose
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who chose
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eat-in
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had
Verb problem
was
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 409
while
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 the score sharply grew to 449 for take-away transactions.
However
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,
Dunsmuir
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 exhibited a similar increasing pattern from 385 on
eat-in
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 to 392 on take-away.
Conversely
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, the main average score in
Darke
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 was strong on
eat-in
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 within 2000 and it had 190 on take-away. Related to the most popular dishes in Georgia,
Dunsmuir
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 and
Darke
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 were chicken burgers,chicken wings and chicken pasta.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, eat-in, dunsmuir, darke with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The table provides data on
  • average time spent
  • fast-food restaurants
  • diners
  • cafés
  • fine dining establishments
  • average cost per person
  • dining experience
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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