The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The above table demonstrates the average
number
of hours and the amount of money people are spending at three different types of restaurants.
Overall
, the most significant feature is Vancouver Georgia Street received the highest number
in transaction value, Eat-in
, take-away and number
of transactions. While
the weakest score on the average number
of transactions was related to dark street
. Fix the agreement mistake
streets
Moreover
, the low main average of other categories was between Dunsmuir
and Darke
Street.
The number
of transaction values in Georgia had a strong amount within 10.69 then
tended to decrease sharply at Dunsmuir
to 5.61. However
, the number
of values at Darke
was in between the two which is 9.02. In contrast
, the rate of people chose
Correct pronoun usage
who chose
eat-in
had
409 Verb problem
was
while
the score sharply grew to 449 for take-away transactions.However
, Dunsmuir
exhibited a similar increasing pattern from 385 on eat-in
to 392 on take-away. Conversely
, the main average score in Darke
was strong on eat-in
within 2000 and it had 190 on take-away. Related to the most popular dishes in Georgia,Dunsmuir
and Darke
were chicken burgers,chicken wings and chicken pasta.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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