The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given charts illustrate the number of graduate and postgraduate

students

from The United Kindom who decided not to apply for a full-time job in the year 2008. These

students

have been divided into 4 different categories part-time jobs, voluntary work,

further

study and Unemployment.

Firstly

, among graduates, the most common career path chosen is to continue to study, which involves almost 30.000 of them.

On the other hand

, the least popular is voluntary work with only 3.500 people doing that.

In addition

, part-time employees have reached roughly 17.700. Sadly,

students

who are unemployed are a little bit more than 16.000.

Secondly

, regarding postgraduates,

further

study and volunteering are still the most and least common, with respectively 2.725 and 345 people.

However

, Part-time jobs are proportionally more popular in

this

group reaching 2.535, only roughly two hundred less than those who focused on studying.

Lastly

, Unemployment unfortunately involves over 1.600

students

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