The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide information about the traditional and free time between two different sex boys and girls.
the highest number of women's cultural activities and leisure was dancing
Overall
, the pie chars
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charts
illustrated
many habits which do it between boys and girls if they have free time which a significant Wrong verb form
illustrate
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comment
commune
boy's
culture Change noun form
boys'
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playing
computers
games Fix the agreement mistake
computer
likewise
reading is the lowest activity in the pie chart.
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with boy's cultural and leisure activities it observed
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per cent
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per cent
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20 per cent in girls cultural .
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27%. The second highest proportion was reading.Change preposition
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to music .Verb problem
listening
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