The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)
The line graph provides information about the percentage of households with four electronic
devices
(MP3, Mobile Phone, Computer and Tablet) from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
although
cell phone was the biggest per
cent
, output fell there and in the tablet over the period. Meanwhile, there were significant rises in households with electronic computers. In 1995, the number of electronic
devices
and mobile phones rapidly increased showing
this
graph of almost 71 per
cent
in 2000 and there was no fluctuation in these
devices
just a slight rise after the top of the per
cent
of almost 100 in 2015 over the period. MP3 started at almost 15 per
cent
but there was no fluctuation, just a 41 per
cent
increase by the end of the year.
However
, and despite the surge in the 20s, computer
devices
were different, cell phone and monitor starting points were the same by just almost 10 per
cent
, computers rapidly increased the same point in mobile phones and the end of the year.
By contrast
, Tablet was the different, maybe in 2003 starting point, just an almost few increased and there were two fluctuated, and end of the year in 2015 these
devices
third position by almost 81 per
cent
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words devices, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • ownership percentages
  • electronic devices
  • 20-year period
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • detailed comparison
  • highest ownership rates
  • dramatic changes
  • potential reasons
  • trends
  • shifts
  • insights
  • implications
  • future device ownership patterns
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