The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays the five different product categories by one export country in two different years 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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all five
products
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increased their exports,
while
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petroleum and engineers were exporters many times greater than any other product in both years. The other significant feature of
this
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graph is that in 2016 exporter
products
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fluctuated many times.
According to
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the bar chart, petroleum and engineered goods were top of the
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by almost 62, which were slightly deceased petroleum under 60 and other
products
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engineers almost 58
billion
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in 2015.
In contrast
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, textiles were the big difference in both years, there were nearly 28 and 32
billion
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ups and downs. In the two
products
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in which both gems and jewellery,
as well as
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agriculture, compete, first in 2015 was higher than in 2016 by almost 43 and under 40
billion
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. Second agriculture there were alternative down and ups in 2015 and 2016.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • increase
  • decrease
  • comparison
  • significant
  • figures
  • percentage
  • notable
  • trend
  • overall
  • specific
  • observed
  • presented
  • individually
  • highlight
  • general
  • data
  • summarize
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