Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The given table compares data about 3 various
factor
that related to the life Change to a plural noun
factors
experctancy
and growing communities in 3 several types of Correct your spelling
expectancy
countries
which had different incomes in 2 years namely, 2002 and 2004.
Overall
, it was important that the middle income
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middle-income
countries
roughly had the best situation instead
of the others and
.
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According to
the diagram, the countries
with high salaries,which reached the main number as
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of
time
for life expectancy at Change to a plural noun
times
the
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birth
by 78, were not good at birth
owing to the fact that their average birth
per women
had the lowest amount Fix the agreement mistake
woman
between
the others with 1.7; Change preposition
among
moreover
, fashion
of the percentage of their Add an article
the fashion
citizens
reduced form 2002 by 0.1% and hit 0.7%. Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
the
money had the main effect on Correct article usage
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the
life expectancy at Correct article usage
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the
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birth
and its trend increasing
over the period of 2 years owing to the fact that Wrong verb form
increased
countries
with hight
incomes reached Correct your spelling
high
the
78 and 78.7 in 2002 and 2004 ; Correct article usage
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then
middle
one hit 69.1 in 2002, and its 0.9 increased in 2004; Correct article usage
the middle
thereafter
, lowere
touched 58.1 and 58.8 in 2002 and 2004. In Correct your spelling
lower
were
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contrast
contrats
, money had Correct your spelling
contrast
revese
fraction Correct your spelling
reverse
with
the average Change preposition
of
birth
per women
and all women in developed Fix the agreement mistake
woman
countries
did not have a child inasmuch as the high income
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high-income
countries
scored 1.7 in both years; then
middle
income, which trend reduced from 2.2 to 2.1, was the second one; Add an article
the middle
furthermore
, lowere
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lower
countries
, the first countries
in the two times,Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, birth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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