The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the transformation of Chorleywood
village
, located near London,
due to
population increasing from 1868 to 1994.
Overall
, it is evident that there
was
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major changes
on
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transportation infrastructure and
village
areas over a century. As the population increased, the infrastructure and housing area were
also
developed. In the first period, 1868 to 1883, a small area
village
was located between two main roads which crossed each other, running from north to south and west to east.
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1883 to 1992, a large Chorleywood station was built to the southern of the
village
area. Following the period, from 1992 until 1970, two large villages appeared and located
to
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each side of the station.
Moreover
, a motorway was developed on the eastern side by 1970. By the end of the period, 1970 to 1994, a railway was built
at
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1909, running from east to west and crossing the
mainroad
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main road
and motorway. Five new
village
areas were
also
introduced around both roads, completing the development throughout all periods.
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