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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the transformation of Chorleywood
village
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, located near London,
due to
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 population increasing from 1868 to 1994.
Overall
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, it is evident that there
was
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were
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 major changes
on
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in
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 transportation infrastructure and
village
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 areas over a century. As the population increased, the infrastructure and housing area were
also
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 developed. In the first period, 1868 to 1883, a small area
village
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 was located between two main roads which crossed each other, running from north to south and west to east.
By
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From
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 1883 to 1992, a large Chorleywood station was built to the southern of the
village
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 area. Following the period, from 1992 until 1970, two large villages appeared and located
to
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on
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the
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each side of the station.
Moreover
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, a motorway was developed on the eastern side by 1970. By the end of the period, 1970 to 1994, a railway was built
at
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in
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 1909, running from east to west and crossing the
mainroad
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main road
 and motorway. Five new
village
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 areas were
also
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 introduced around both roads, completing the development throughout all periods.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • geographical features
  • 19th century
  • construction
  • public buildings
  • railways
  • infrastructure
  • economic activities
  • housing developments
  • commercial zones
  • environmental concerns
  • deforestation
  • traffic
  • urban sprawl
  • notable architecture
  • landmarks
  • urbanization
  • expansion
  • modernization
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