You hired a car company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I hired a motorcar on 23 July 2024 from Tilak Nagar, Delhi. I hired it for two weeks because I planned a road trip to Kerala

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my family.

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, on the 30 July,

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I was in Gwalior, Madhya

Pardesh

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a motorcycle crashed into my car. He was a teenager

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and was driving in

wrong

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the wrong

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lane,

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, he did not

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a valid Driving License

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. I was struck by a shock with the incident and after making sure that the two-wheeler rider

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fine, I immediately informed the Police. The officers registered my complaint and after verifying my documents they allowed me to go. Later, I informed and explained everything to one of the customer service executives of the company. I hope

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information is

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to you in claiming insurance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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coherence cohesion

While the letter is mostly well-structured, be careful with repetitive phrases such as "while" at the beginning of sentences.

task achievement

There are a few minor grammatical errors, such as using "he did not had a valid Driving License" instead of "he did not have a valid Driving License." Proofreading can help catch these errors.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite, which contributes to a positive tone.

logical structure

The letter is logically structured, detailing the timeline of the incident and the steps you took afterward.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph contains a single, clear idea which makes the letter easy to follow.

complete response

The response fully addresses the task, including when and where the car was hired, how the accident happened, and what actions were taken afterward.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
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return
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