The chart below gives information about how commuters travelled to work in one city in new zealand Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Bar chart provided data regarding how employees travelled to their respective jobs in a city in New Zealand in the
year
1996 and 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, we can clearly see that personal cars or trucks are the highest methods of transportation from the categories shown, where it reached up to 50 percent
in 1996 and approximately just under 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2006.
The other ways of transportation, Change the spelling
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such
as. Company vehicles, people who walked or used bicycles, and also
the ones who worked from home. Although
the percentages were relatively close in range having all of them around 10-14% in both years there was still a difference. Whereas
, the workers who were using trains, and motorcycles had the lowest percentage rate at roughly about 3 percent
.Change the spelling
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