The chart shows the rate of smoking in men and women in Britain between 1900 and 1950.
The line chart compares the
number
of smokers
who smoked in Britain
from 1900 to 1950.
Overall
, the number
of smokers
was men, While
the number
of female smokers
who smoked in Britain
was lowest in the given years
.
In terms of smokers
, more than 600 male smokers
out of thousand
people smoked in Correct article usage
a thousand
Brotain
in the year Correct your spelling
Britain
of
1900,and female Change preposition
apply
smokers
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
than
100 in the same Correct quantifier usage
more than
years
. Between 1900 and 1920, male smokers
decreased from above 600 to almost 520, but for female
, the Fix the agreement mistake
females
number
increased from below 100 to around 350, an increase of 250 over 20 years
in Britain
.
For the remaining years
, the number
of male smokers
who smoked in Britain
decreased slowly to almost 200 from 520 between the years
of
1900 and 1950, a decrease of nearly 320 over 30 Change preposition
apply
years
. On the other hand
, female smokers
remained stable in the years
of 1920 and 1930, at 350. For the next 20 years
, this
figure decreased to around 180 in 1950.Submitted by mdtipusultanakhand on
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