The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the percentages of
population
and
wealth
distribution in 8 regions in the world. All
an
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in
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all, the highest
wealth
distribution is found in North
America
, Europe and Rich
Asia-Pacific
,
whereas
the
number of
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population
is relatively low in all areas except for China. North
America
has the most global
wealth
reaching almost 35%
while
only having just above 5% of
population
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the population
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.
Similarly
, Europe and Rich
Asia-Pacific
distribute 30% and 25% of
wealth
respectively. The number of global
wealth
in China, Other Asia Pacific, India, Africa
and
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Latin
America
&
Carribean
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Caribbean
was lower than 5%. Other
Asia-Pacific
, India and Europe share similar
number
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numbers
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in terms of
population
which is around 15%. There are only less than 10%
people
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of people
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who
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live in Africa, Latin
America
&
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the Carribean
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Carribean
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Caribbean
and Rich
Asia-Pacific
.
In contrast
, China's
population
is the highest accounting for almost a quarter.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, wealth, america, asia-pacific with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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