The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of
population
and wealth
distribution in 8 regions in the world. All an
all, the highest Correct your spelling
in
wealth
distribution is found in North America
, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific
, whereas
the number of
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population
is relatively low in all areas except for China.
North America
has the most global wealth
reaching almost 35% while
only having just above 5% of population
. Add an article
the population
Similarly
, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific
distribute 30% and 25% of wealth
respectively. The number of global wealth
in China, Other Asia Pacific, India, Africa and
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America
& Carribean
was lower than 5%.
Other Correct your spelling
Caribbean
Asia-Pacific
, India and Europe share similar number
in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
population
which is around 15%. There are only less than 10% people
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of people
who
live in Africa, Latin Correct pronoun usage
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America
& Correct article usage
the Carribean
Carribean
and Rich Correct your spelling
Caribbean
Asia-Pacific
. In contrast
, China's population
is the highest accounting for almost a quarter.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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