The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on what people in five different countries chose to do with their discretionary income. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
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of
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people
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mange
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their salaries ,in which different five nations It’s evident that the largest percentage of
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their discretionary income was spending among all the nations,
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investing was
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fraction of the discretionary income Among the five countries, people in Morocco spent more on spending ,at 50%,and
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,at 45%. The lower proportion of investing was
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in India,at 3.5 %,and lowest in Vietnam,only at 3.1%,
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the proportion of saving incomes in Finland was higher than in any other
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. It is visible that Pakistan had the lowest percentage of
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,at 8.5
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.what’s more,Pakistan
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little of their discretionary income in spending,at 3.1%。

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • discretionary income
  • expenditure
  • spending patterns
  • comparisons
  • outliers
  • cultural influence
  • economic conditions
  • leisure activities
  • trend analysis
  • cost of living
  • socioeconomic factors
  • proportion
  • priority
  • developed countries
  • employment rates
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