The chart below shows what anthropology graduate fron one university did after finishing their undergarduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologyist in work after five years.
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The pie chart depicts the proportion of anthropology
graduates
destination after graduating undergraduate degree from a particular university, while
the table illustrates the percentage of anthropologists
income after working Change noun form
anthropologists'
anthropologist's
in
five years in three types of employment.
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for
Overall
, it can be seen that majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
graduates
have full-time works
after finishing university, and after five years Fix the agreement mistake
work
working
, Change preposition
of working
anthrologists
who work in Correct your spelling
anthropologists
anthologists
government
sectors have the highest salary
.
After finishing university, most of anthropoly
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anthropology
graduates
continue to full-time working, accounting for 52%. Following
this
, graduates
who continue as part-time workers have similar figure
with unemployed Fix the agreement mistake
figures
graduates
, amounting to 15% and 12%, respectively. While
there is 8% of graduates
who do not know their plans, remaining graduates
decide to reach a higher degree. It shows 8
% of Correct word choice
that 8
graduates
continue to fully study postgraduate qualification and 5% of them continue to pursue a master
degree Change noun form
master's
while
part-time working.
Moving to the table, the group
of $25,000-$49,000 salary
has the least
percentage across all three sectors, freelance Correct word choice
lowest
consultant
(5%), government
sector
(5%) and private companies
(10%). Following
this
, Add an article
an anthropologist
the anthropologist
anthropologist
who Fix the agreement mistake
anthropologists
receive
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receives
salary
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a salary
group
of $50,000-$74,000 was 15% in freelance consultant
and government
sector
, while
private companies
show proportion
of 35%. The next Correct article usage
a proportion
salary
group
is $75,000-$99,999 exhibits increasing percentages from previous
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the previous
group
, which are 40% (freelance consultant
), 30% (government
sector
), and 25% (private companies
). Then
, the rate of anthropologists who have income more
than $100,000 in freelance Change preposition
of more
consultant
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consultants
remain
the same as the previous data. Change the verb form
remains
Government
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The government
sector
follows with 52% and private
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the private
companies
' percentage is 30%.Submitted by chocolate10
on
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