The chart below shows what anthropology graduate fron one university did after finishing their undergarduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologyist in work after five years.

The pie chart depicts the proportion of anthropology

graduates

destination after graduating undergraduate degree from a particular university,

while

the table illustrates the percentage of

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income after working

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five years in three types of employment.

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, it can be seen that

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of

graduates

have full-time

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after finishing university, and after five years

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,

anthrologists

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anthropologists

anthologists

who work in

government

sectors have the highest

salary

. After finishing university, most of

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anthropology

graduates

continue to full-time working, accounting for 52%.

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,

graduates

who continue as part-time workers have similar

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with unemployed

graduates

, amounting to 15% and 12%, respectively.

While

there is 8% of

graduates

who do not know their plans, remaining

graduates

decide to reach a higher degree. It shows

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% of

graduates

continue to fully study postgraduate qualification and 5% of them continue to pursue a

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degree

while

part-time working. Moving to the table, the

group

of $25,000-$49,000

salary

has the

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percentage across all three sectors, freelance

consultant

(5%),

government

sector

(5%) and private

companies

(10%).

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this

,

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an anthropologist

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anthropologist

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who

receive

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salary

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group

of $50,000-$74,000 was 15% in freelance

consultant

and

government

sector

,

while

private

companies

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of 35%. The next

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group

is $75,000-$99,999 exhibits increasing percentages from

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group

, which are 40% (freelance

consultant

), 30% (

government

sector

), and 25% (private

companies

).

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, the rate of anthropologists who have income

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than $100,000 in freelance

consultant

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remain

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the same as the previous data.

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sector

follows with 52% and

private

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the private

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companies

' percentage is 30%.