The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.

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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of various incomes and expenditures made by United States highways

last

year.

Overall

, it is observed that the maximum revenue comes from collecting

taxes

on Fuel. In comparison, General funds were next on the list.

However

, the income generated from Tolls is significantly low.

Moreover

, in the case of Vehicle

taxes

and Bonds,

this

figure is almost the same. On closer examination, it can be seen that

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close to 25% of the money that was earned by the Highway department had come from Fuel

taxes

, and

this

was the highest contributor.

Also

, 23.4% was from Regular Funds, resulting

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to achieve

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the second rank.

Apart from

this

, out of every 100rs that was collected, only 6.2rs was coming from Tolls,

this

was the lowest. For Bonds and Vehicle

taxes

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taxes,

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this

number was close to 13rs.

Whereas

20.3% of the revenue was generated from other sources.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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