The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.

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illustrates the spent (millions of

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pounds

) from the tourists

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visit the UK between 1980 and 2010. The

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reported

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data in five

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period

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1980, 1985, 1990,1995,2000,2005 and 2010. The pie charts

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data about why the

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foreign

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foreign

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arrived to the UK in 1980 and 2010

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, it is observed from the

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that despite

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suffering some dips during the period the

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of pounds spent by

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visitors

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increased

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;just after 1995 was the

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maximum

spenditure

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expenditure

. The pie chart reports four reasons why the

visitors

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came to the UK, which are holidays, business, visiting friends and family and

other

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. Evaluating the

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, it is noticed that after suffering a decline after 1985 the

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trend increased until 1990whre

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, reporting the spend under 9,000

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pounds. From

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point

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there is a

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increase reaching

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12,000

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pounds.

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, between 2000 and 2005 there is another noticeable decline. The amount of money

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visitors

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peak

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again after 2005,

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the

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starts to decline again. Looking closely

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the pie chart, holidays

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more reported in both years.

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the second reason with a higher percentage in 1980 was

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business

and in 2010 it was visiting friends and family. The reason other

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is reported with a 16.6% in 1980 and only a 9.8% in 2010.