The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.

The
line
graph
illustrates the spent (millions of
punds
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pounds
) from the tourists
whom
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visit the UK between 1980 and 2010. The
graph
reported
this
data in five
years
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period
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as
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1980, 1985, 1990,1995,2000,2005 and 2010. The pie charts
gives
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data about why the
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foreign
foreing
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foreign
visitors
arrived to the UK in 1980 and 2010
Overall
, it is observed from the
line
graph
that despite
of
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suffering some dips during the period the
amount
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of pounds spent by
the
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visitors
increased
overtime
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;just after 1995 was the
maximun
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maximum
spenditure
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expenditure
. The pie chart reports four reasons why the
visitors
came to the UK, which are holidays, business, visiting friends and family and
other
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others
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. Evaluating the
line
graph
, it is noticed that after suffering a decline after 1985 the
graph
trend increased until 1990whre
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sufferers
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a
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, reporting the spend under 9,000
millions
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pounds. From
this
point
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there is a
dramatical
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increase reaching
the
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12,000
millions
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pounds.
Thus
, between 2000 and 2005 there is another noticeable decline. The amount of money
spend
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by
the
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visitors
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visitor's
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peak
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again after 2005,
afterwards
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the
line
starts to decline again. Looking closely
to
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the pie chart, holidays
was
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the
reaon
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reason
more reported in both years.
However
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the second reason with a higher percentage in 1980 was
bussines
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business
and in 2010 it was visiting friends and family. The reason other
,
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is reported with a 16.6% in 1980 and only a 9.8% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, graph, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • expenditure
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • 30-year period
  • tourism
  • business trips
  • educational purposes
  • visiting friends or relatives
  • significant changes
  • global events
  • economic conditions
  • socio-cultural changes
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