The chart below gives information about journeys to school by children aged between 11 and 16 in the UK in one year
The depicted bar chart elucidates the way and the accommodation
students
aged 11 to 16 travelled to school
over a year. From an overall
perspective, walking and taking the bus is the most picked by children
with the nearest distance
from school
, and students
whose homes are far away choose to take a bus.
The distance
to school
maximum of 1mile is mostly done by walking, 90% of children
choose to walk, but then
it dropped drastically to 60% when it comes to 1-2 miles
and only 10% of students
walk due to
2-5 miles
. In addition
, students
whose homes are more than 5 miles
, do not choose to walk. However
, the amount of children
who used the bus initially
started at around 2% and then
the percentage increased to 10% when the distance
was up to 1 mile. the percentage increase to 50% and increased drastically to around 68% when it comes to the furthest distance
.
Conversely
, cars used by children
with close distance
to school
are about 10% and then
increased by around 23% for 1-2 miles
. And then
, increased to almost 33% when it comes to distances 2-5 miles
and experienced a decrease of about 10 percent
at longer distances.
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Lastly
, unlike the other transportation, the bicycle did not have a very clear percentage change over the entire distance
. Students
chose to ride a bike under 7 percent
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per cent
distance
of under 1-5 miles
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